Sunday, January 16, 2011

The 12 day coma

On a Halloween night, two boys and one girl, named Brody, Josh and Aimee, went to forty houses to trick or treat. The houses were all decorated with popping out ghosts and flying zombies, zooming from tree to tree. There were even skeletons coming up from graves! They had to get to the houses without being attacked by the scary Halloween decorations!

Aimee got past them by using an invisible cloak, she was dressed as Ironman. The cloak was very very hard to wear over the bulky costume. Brody, who was Luke Skywalker for the night, ran past the ghosts and zombies by jumping behind bushes and trees and with his light saber he cut through the some strings so the zombies could not fly anymore. Josh shot through them all, with rocket rollerskates, which was hard to put on because he was dressed as Aimee the waitress and the skates were one size too small for his feet, it was worth it though because the smaller skates were cheaper!

When they got to the houses, each house told them to take as much candy as they could get into their buckets. Little did the people know, the trick or treaters had 2000 to fill! So, all of the containers got full! Aimee, Josh and Brody took from eight o’clock at night all the way until one o’clock in the morning to fill up all 2000 pails.

The next day, the three kids ate allllll of the candy, in one hour! They got stomach aches, it hurt so bad. Their bellies felt like bombs about to explode! They went to the hospital. When they got to the doctor, they told them that they had a candy infection of the intestines! They had to be in a coma for twelve days!

Twelve days later, Aimee, Josh and Brody finally got out of the hospital. The kids realized that they should only eat two pieces of candy each day. The doctor had told them that if they had a candy infection one more time, the coma would last twenty four days!!! So they never ever ate that much candy again.

Then they went rollerskating around the blocks they went trick or treating on. They noticed all the scary decorations were gone! Brody was the first one to fall down because he was not very good at this. Aimee was the second, she had only practiced four times. Josh finally fell, he had only practiced one more time than Aimee. And then they had a big laugh!

They went home and drank some nice, SUGAR-FREE, hot chococlate.

3 comments:

  1. Luckily you get all your rollerskating skills from your mom!!! Great story Brody, I like how you are adding in details and developing ideas!!!
    Keep it up buddy!!!

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  2. Another awesome story dude. I like how you guys had 2000 trick or treat pails to fill. Keep up the good work. I am so proud of you!

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  3. very good story Brody...I liked all the details you put in it. Good job! Write some more, we're all eager to read some more of your writings. Love u dolly, Grandma

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